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Who knew things would turn out this way? I've always had an inkling, but no, not you.
You and your reckless thoughts and your ruthless words, spat and screamed out to the world, directed to who...
I never really know. Is it me, is it her, is it him or is it them- and then you ask, "Why"?
Why, oh, why, does the world treat you so? But I can never really answer you - how could I?
This world hardly ever treats us right. So, tell me, just what is bliss?
Bliss? A blessing from Heaven? A blessing from the world? A warning to tell us, "I'm sorry, but you know what's coming after this."
You and your reckless thoughts and your ruthless words, spat and screamed out to the world, directed to who...
I never really know. Is it me, is it her, is it him or is it them- and then you ask, "Why"?
Why, oh, why, does the world treat you so? But I can never really answer you - how could I?
This world hardly ever treats us right. So, tell me, just what is bliss?
Bliss? A blessing from Heaven? A blessing from the world? A warning to tell us, "I'm sorry, but you know what's coming after this."
I was... trying to write something else... but this pent up emotion just suddenly bubbled out. >.>
Wrote this to enter into DFC's February Form Fiesta. Do check it out and enter if you wish! The deadline's 1st March 2015.
I'm planning to attempt the other forms in the contest as well, so there will be more shaky experiments to come. XD
This was for the first form, The Mirror Sestet, which I did one of before, but I wrote this one very differently - much closer to my normal style of writing... I'm not sure if that's a good or bad thing.
Update: Ahaha... This won me 100 points.
Wrote this to enter into DFC's February Form Fiesta. Do check it out and enter if you wish! The deadline's 1st March 2015.
I'm planning to attempt the other forms in the contest as well, so there will be more shaky experiments to come. XD
This was for the first form, The Mirror Sestet, which I did one of before, but I wrote this one very differently - much closer to my normal style of writing... I'm not sure if that's a good or bad thing.
Update: Ahaha... This won me 100 points.
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