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She Seems To Love It by ~classic-poet:iconclassic-poet:



She Seems To Love It

Boys and men,
Seem to find themselves staring.
Always staring,
At her.

The way she walks,
Talks, and laughs.
It's as though,
She's doing it on purpose.

She wears make-up,
Thick, but not too thick.
Her clothes are branded items,
Bought wastefully, using money like water.

She loves it though,
Her vanity.

She doesn't mind,
The ogling eyes.
Or having to waste
All that money.

She finds it satisfying,
To know she’s wanted.
It feels good,
To be wanted.

She doesn’t care,
That she’s like a piece of meat.
It’s almost like being,
The only woman in the world.

That’s why she loves it,
Her vanity.
©2008-2009 ~classic-poet
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Wrote this poem for the monthly competition held by :iconwriteaway: [link]

The topic is "Vanity".

I wanted to change the perspective that I usually write from for this poem.. which meant that I was going to pick something, and write from that something's point of view. In this case a vain woman. It's about how even though, people like me, might find it annoying and disgraceful, she doesn't because it makes her feel good about herself.

Hope you like it, and hope I didn't offend anyone.. ^^;
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awsum poem ur truely a gifted writer :D

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Aw thanks! :D :hug:

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God has blessed us with so much, but how often do we take the time to truly appreciate and be grateful for something? Or to say thank you? Be thankful and remember it's better to give than to take. :)
amazing :D

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Thank you! :D

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God has blessed us with so much, but how often do we take the time to truly appreciate and be grateful for something? Or to say thank you? Be thankful and remember it's better to give than to take. :)
really good :clap:

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Thank you! :D :hug:

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God has blessed us with so much, but how often do we take the time to truly appreciate and be grateful for something? Or to say thank you? Be thankful and remember it's better to give than to take. :)
I like this piece the best....
"Bought wastefully, using money like water."

Your message was strong, very well done hon. :)


:butterfly: :love:

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Across the face of the Earth, her ruby cheeks shone; Winds of whisper buried seeds of rumor, made her secret well grown.
Lol, you seem to like lines where I talk about using water. :XD: There was another poem, where I had this "...Like the water dripping, Lifelessly from my tap."

And you liked that bit best too! :XD:

Thank you. :)

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God has blessed us with so much, but how often do we take the time to truly appreciate and be grateful for something? Or to say thank you? Be thankful and remember it's better to give than to take. :)
Well you do incorporate them gorgeously, hon.;)

More than welcome.:D

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Across the face of the Earth, her ruby cheeks shone; Winds of whisper buried seeds of rumor, made her secret well grown.

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